Happy to be alive [Poem]

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    Happy to be alive

    I am lying on the grass

    The Sun is bright

    My heart is warm

    I feel so alive

    But what about when I die

    What will the world be like

    Did I affect it in any way?
    Will my life mean something

    It’s hard some days when I  walk through a dark alley

    You can get stabbed like J.T Yorke from Degrassi

    But one by one as the days go by

    One by one as people die

    One by one as the world keeps saying they don’t care about me or my life

    I’m happy to be lying on the grass looking at the bright blue sky

    Blinded by the sun

    I’m happy  to be  alive

  • #7502

    OOOOOOOh!!!! This got dark really fast. The only thing I can think of is that the 4th last line somewhat confused me…but other than that I love every part of it!

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